User blog comment:Ltmaroon57/Speculations For season 13/@comment-5746209-20141005175812

Hello Ltmaroon57, it's Agent Maroon78. First off, I would like to thank you for your reply on my page and I'm glad to hear that you and Wes have become pals. Me and Wes are good friends, so it's nice to know you'll be part of the circle. Feel free to call me Maroon, as my friends often call me that.

Now on to helping you with your blog. I'm glad to see that you are editing it from time to time like you said and it does look more detailed. However, I can see some typos in it: "Blood Gulch chronicles" (chronicles needs to be capitalized), "Meta/Main" (add an 'e' at the end), you have quite a few unneeded capitalized words in you second to last sentence, and "the Chairmon has" (replace the 'o' with an 'a'). Also, you forgot to include the Project Freelancer Saga in your summary. You don't need to give each saga a summary (so you can remove the info about the Recollection Trilogy), but you should give a lot more detail about the current saga, since that's the one we're speculating about. For example, you forgot to mention the Blood Gulch Crew crash landing on the planet, Felix's betrayal, the name of the Chorus' armies, and how the Reds and Blues were split up (state Tucker, Simmons, Grif, and Caboose joined the New Republic).

On to your aesthetic appeal. While the gallery is a great addition, the summary is a bland paragraph. Take Wes' speculation blog for example, he adds in jokes to make it seems like he actually is there for the readers' fun. You gave me a very good idea when you messaged Wes on his talk page. To attract your readers, make a parody of the classic Director-Chairman messages in Reconstruction, which was referenced in the last episode of Season 12. It would work greatly for your blog in my opinion and I think you'll do nicely. Lastly, don't be afraid to add links to characters on your blog, just in case a reader wants to learn more about them and their involvement in the current saga.

I hope I've provided some helpful information for you. All I ask from this is to obtain some credit for helping you. Since both of us have similar names with "maroon", I guess we'll be called Team Maroon if we work together from now on. I look forward to your aid on the wiki and hope you have a great October.